I discussed my script with two of my actors, Luke and Charlie, as well as my teacher who came up with some minor suggestions to change my script. I was only given two real things to change as I need to add some inter-titles to break up my film trailer and the title of my film due to the fact that it doesn't sound very much like a horror or thriller film. I also fixed the spelling and punctuation mistakes that I made. I also added a little bit to the third scene.
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| I like these inter-titles that my teacher suggested as it gives a countdown of the gang members as they get either stalked or murdered |
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| The title was "Midnight Tolls" but it didn't match the horror and thriller genre so I decided to change the title to "HALLOWEEN RETRIBUTION" or "WINTER'S REVENGE" |
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| The spelling mistakes have been corrected |
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| This shows the addition of another part of the third scene where it highlights the main character Logan as a stalker as he is following the gang members on facebook and the pictures in the profiles are going to be from strange angles that look like Logan has been stalking them. This page also shows the new inter-titles - "Her death will be avenged" and "3" "2" "1" as scenes come up with the different gang members. |
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| This is just correcting spelling and punctuation mistakes |
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